Quick POV Edit to Consider

A quick POV edit:

  • In short, she thought he was lying.
  • In short, he was probably lying.

They mean the same thing.  But the first one comes from outside “her” head.  The second one is what “she” is more likely to think.  “He’s probably lying,” she thought.  Versus “I thought he was lying,” she thought.  The “thought” is already understood.

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